“Seemingly fine” is very “father of daughter” language, LOL! I enjoyed the homily excerpt and the emails at the beginning and end—it feels like youre experimenting with different ways to tell a story, and it grounds the narrative you told in the middle. There’s lives happening outside of what you tell in the story! Very cool!
“Seemingly fine” is very “father of daughter” language, LOL! I enjoyed the homily excerpt and the emails at the beginning and end—it feels like youre experimenting with different ways to tell a story, and it grounds the narrative you told in the middle. There’s lives happening outside of what you tell in the story! Very cool!
Thank you! Antonio is quite protective of his daughter. 😁
Aieee! I am all caught up. This is so good!